Sunday, November 2, 2008

A note... and my reply...

(picture by Moz Saleem)

Yaad....

Agar kabhi mairee yaad aye

to chand raton kee dilgeer roshni mein

kisi sitare ko dekh lena.

Agar woh nakhal-e-falak se ur kar

tumhare qadmon mein aa gire to ye jaan lena

wo ista`ara tha merey dil ka.

Agar na aye? ...


Magar ye mumkin hee kis tarah hai

ke kisi par nighah dalo

to us ki dewar-e-jan nah tootey,

Woh apni hasti nah bhool jaey!


Agar kabhi mairee yaad aye

ghuraiz karti huwa ki lehron peh haath rakhna.

Mein khushbo-on mein tumhein miloon ga.

Mujhe ghulabon ki patiyon mein talash karna.

Mein aos-e-qatra ke ai-non mein tumhein miloon ga.


Agar sitaron mein, aos-e-khusboo-on meinna pao mujhe ko,

to apne qadmon mein dekh lena.

Mein gird hoti musafaton mein tumhein miloon ga.

Kaheen pe roshan chiragh dekho to jaan lena

keh har patange ke sath mein bhi sulag chuka hoon.


Tum apne hathon se in patangon ki khakh darya mein dal dena

mein khakh ban kar samundar mein safar karoon ga.

Kisi na dekhe huwe jazeere peruk ke tumhein sadaein doon ga.

Samundaron ke safar pe nikloto is jazeere pe kabhi utarna ...


[A. I. Amjad]


My reply:


Jab chand ki roshani andharay viraanay may giray gi

To samajh layna...

Kay may aayi thi...


Jab shabnam gulab kay lab chumay gi

To samajh layna...

Kay may aayi thi...


Jab sitaray chun mun chamkay gain

To samajh layna...

Woh meri hansi thi...


Jab samandar ki lahar saahil say takrayai gi

To samajh layna...

Woh meri jhalak thi...


Sulagtay patangay ko lutf mai agar dekho gay

To samajh layna...

Woh nasha mai hi to thi...


Kabhi dur tumsay to thi hi nahi

Tum Samajh layna...

Tumhari saans mai hi to thi...


[Shahnaz Khawaja]

16 comments:

hasan said...

The first time I heard this poem was in Abrar-ul-Haq's first album.. Abrar sang it beautifully and i thought it was one of the best in the album but I was too young to understand it then..unfortunately it has started to make a lot of sense now

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h597FXY4oqA

Hyper-Threaded said...

Marvelous..!

Wonderful reply there by you Shez. I was wondering... Despite being a full-time mother, a student and of course you have other things to do, how come do you do this??? Baffles me sometimes.... Amazing pieces of text you create there!

May the Lord God give you eternal grace to make people like me happy by reading your writings... Amen!

Signed,
HT.

Anonymous said...

It seems as if Shahnaz is reading Urdu literature now days to capitalize on Urdu Poetry

Z Sattar said...

Another perfectoo

hasan said...

@hasan

It would be a good idea for Abrar to resing the song as a duet with Hadiqa singing Shahnaz's reply ;)

Shahnaz said...

@ hasan...

ah... an entanglement I see....
:P

Shahnaz said...

HT

well it was like this...

i was browsing a friends profile on FB and he had written this note so the reply jumped into my head and I jotted it down and then googled A.I Amjad and thought... Holy Crap! That's like a famous poet.... I like what I had written so I kept it.

:P

yeah I don't REALLY write see...

The way I look at it, the writing has a life all its own... it already exists... out there... somewhere... all iI do is uncover it or find it. It just happens. It IS....

I am merely the instrument. This one took less than ten minutes... the time was all i the typing... i type with two fingers!

Shahnaz said...

faisal

i can't read Urdu!
alas!!

Shahnaz said...

so hasan/audacious one

is this an ego alter ego thing or am i seeing two of you or is dissociative identity disorder occurring on my blog too???

hasan audacious one

Shahnaz said...

zeeshan

thanks mate!

Anonymous said...

Its pretty :)

mo said...
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hasan said...

It must be either the ego-alter ego or the dissociative identity thing since you are certainly not seeing two...

I leave the diagnosis to the only expert on this blog.

Anonymous said...

Good stuff Shahnaz!!! is this your shaa'eree?

btw le'me know when you come across a dissociative identity disorder in real life. My understanding; its a unicorn.

Still have to finish the uncompleted hypnosis session :)

best of luck and hope for good from the new guy in white house

S

Anonymous said...

...please where can I buy a unicorn?

Anonymous said...

...please where can I buy a unicorn?