When it happens
You will know
When it hits you
With a gale force wind
You will know
When in love
You will know
The irony is
You only realize
That you are...
You only know
That you love...
When you lose it
Or almost lose it
...
That is when
It hits
Like a storm
It rages
REALIZATION
That you love...
You Love
You LOVE
YOU LOVE
Someone
The lucky few
Get to salvage
The woeful many
Only lose
Their love
If nothing lasts-
Then how can love?
If nothing lasts-
Then how does love?
...
12 comments:
no loss no love
no love no loss...
happens with most of us though..
but love in love as love will love!
no stopping it!
When we tear, that means we care. But when we cry, that means we love.
shahnaz!
I have been reading your blog for some time...and am quite impressed by your creative talents...i have been inspired to write a piece of my own for an endearing purpose...would you mind to give it a read?...i would love to see your comments
If nothing lasts-
Then how can love?
If nothing lasts-
Then how does love?
WELL SAID...
Love is GOD's,
It can and does last like THE GOD...!
seher
quite true!
anonymous-
first give me a name ti call you by.... anonymouses get confusing. :P
and of course i'd love to read your writing. if you'd like it to be kept private just mark that comment as "do not publish".
happy writing.
i have been writing since i could hold a pen. it has brought me the greatest joy and comfort. hope you enjoy writing too.
BTW what is the endearing endeavor??
Faisal Nadeem...
long time no chat. thanks for the comment. And yes love is divine...
:)
Shahnaz, thanks for the quick response...i am unable to find the "do not publish" tab...
Well dear Shahnaz...!
I'm not that lucky to chat with you (I feel like an early-days-Gulsher, jisko ap ne sher bana dia tha, :)).
I only sometimes dare to comment on your masterpieces.
It gave me pleasure to know that my absence wasn't heedless at your forum.
Actually I was in my comfort land, Pakistan, for a month or so, on holidays.
Thanks anyways.
Bravo...
Areeba
There is no tab. Just write do not publish at the beginning of the comment and i will not publish it. Please include an e mail address though, so I can correspond with you.
:)
Could it be the hour of the night?
Or perhaps the shining moonlight
That I feel, what I feel inside
And inside I know that I know
Or do I?
(Not one of my better pieces but I thought I'd post anyway:) )
*Thumbs up* at:
If nothing lasts-
Then how can love?
If nothing lasts-
Then how does love?
:):)
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