Friday, January 15, 2010

explosion

felt my heart open
and love gushed out
the ice finally melted
and love poured out
felt confused
felt sure and unsure
felt love
felt you
f-e-l-t
it exploded out

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

salamz
SHAHNAZ,ITS A GIFT PLEASE READ IT BEFORE PASTE.AND ALSO LISTEN IT ON YOUTUBE PLEASE.
From those around ,
I hear a cry,
oh GOD,oh GOD,
My eyes are blind,
from those around,
I hear a cry,
A muffled sob,
A hopeless sigh,
I hear their footsteps leaving slow,
and then i know my soul must fly,
A chilly wind begins to blow,
with in my soul,
from head to toe,
And then,
last breath escapes my lips,
Its time to leave,
and I must go,
so,its true(but its too late),
They said,"Each soul has its given date"
when its must leave its body's core,
And meet with it's Eternal fate,
Oh! mark the words that i do say,
who knows?Tomorrow could be your day,
At last,it comes to Heaven or Hell,
Decide which now,do not delay,
come on my Brothers lets us pray!
Decide which now,DO NOT delay,
Oh GOD oh GOD,
I cannot see,
My eyes are blind,
M i still me?
or has my soul been led astray,
And forced to pay a priceless FEE!
Alas to dust we all return,
some shall rejoice,
while others burn,
If only I knew that before,
The line grew short,
And came my turn,
And now,As beneath the sod,
They lay me(with my record flawed)
They cry,not knowing,
I cry worse,
For they go home,I faced my GOD!
Oh! mark the words that I do say,
Who knows? tomorrow could be your day,
At last,it comes to Heaven or Hell,
Decide which now,
Do NOT delay,
come on my Brothers lets us Pray,
Decide which now,
do not delay,
Decide which now,
do not delay....

English naat.
Ahmed Bukhatir (Last Breath)
FROM IBAD AASHAR

Ahsan said...
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Anonymous said...

keep it like a dewdrop on a finger tip and dont let it fall
:)

Ahsan said...
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solo said...

so you wept at the end?...ah sad...

solo said...

and please write something to my posts...i was a kid when i watched ABC and simply adored your character..and its my luck that i found you here:)...and i wish you all the happiness in your life

Umer said...

saw u on nks u r still awsum and lovely my first love wish :p :)

Imran K. said...

By the way, did that cake on the Nadia Khan show really look like Sarah Jessica Parker? I laughed so hard when I heard you say that.

mangosteen said...

love seems like such a cruel extreme sometimes.

FAISAL RIAZ said...

Good rhythmic poem...

I have observed that you or more on poetry side now days. Write some articles/ stories too.

Anonymous said...

Shanaz jee :)
Loved seeing u on tv after such a long time and really enjoyed the way faraz was super careful lol!!! loved it...btw u r as beautiful as u were :) I am a huge fan of yours but not just because ur an amazing actress but the way u express ur feelings through the words.

I was once heart broken and accidently ended up visiting ur blog back in last yr and requested u to post something that wud make me feel better and I was SHOCKED to see that u did posted something to cheer me up. Since then I am a huge fan of urs.
You have such an amzing personality and u r so humble and down to earth. I love you just like my older sister.

Annnddd well said about "girls are stronger than guys ;) ;) LOVED IT!!! Its just that they NEED to realise this NOW LOL!!!
keep posting new stuff and keep smiling.
May Allah be with u.

Moody Jones said...

E-X-P-L-O-S-I-O-N-!