Wednesday, April 28, 2010

...and so love dies...

ego
pride
wrong
or...
right?

change me
take me
make me
break me...

who did?
you did-
i did
we both did...

truth
and lies...
hope
demise
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who aches
you do
i do
we do

who's afraid
i am
you are
so why
not say it
we are...
afraid
oh so afraid-

who loves
you do
i do
you
me
we do...
l-o-v-e

yet
we
ache
and break
and tear apart
you
me
...

WE
TEAR
APART
OUR
L-O-V-E

WHY?
why
why
why
why
why...
w-h-y

Love me
Hold me
Let me
Love you

Love you
Hold you
Want to
Love you

which will it be?

Me
You

or

We
Us

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ego
pride
win
hide
lie
cry
soon we must all die...

then why?

why-

cry...

because

we won!

oh but what have we won!!!

our,

ego
pride
demise
----

and so love dies...

have a heart
lose the battles
win the war
humble self
ego forgo
courage gain
and let not ever your
LOVE
die in vain

for it dies in vain-
and so love dies...

have a heart
true to you heart remain

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

i dont know what we both look for at least you know but i dont and irony is that w could not get it from eachother, Great, is not it. its good to know that you are still alive ;) just kidding Gal. take care. well i would suggest (Just suggest) take the first step, forget about ego. Well in Love there is no case about ego, if it is...then its not love.
Bye, love

Anonymous said...

In love there is no ego but are u sure its love SK?
It may be cliched but if u want to know, let go...if they come back to u, u know. If not, it was just not meant to be.
TH

Anonymous said...

comon, TH its an old saying ;)now things have gone towards modernization, you let them go they find another lolllzzz. So why not to stick to one and keep trying trying n trying "Everything is possible, impossible!!!, just a little bit more time". Well SAK U know I always took it to the hilt ;) . Follow the lead, try try and try, if your thoughts stumble a bit, just think of ME and you will get a new spirit to pursue it to the hilt. Take care Gal do not consume yourself in the process OK! You can Love as many time as you can and which satisfies you. God be with you (Ameen)

Anonymous said...

TH, I feel like I know you :P Your writing style reminds me of my old friend :) For a minute I really thought I was reading your (my friend's) comment.

I regret to say that I lost that dear friend of mine *tears* !!!

I...just want to say that I miss you!!!

LOL...I might be wrong to say what I said about me knowing you but that's how I felt and I could not stop myself from saying what I said.
If you are that friend of mine then I hope you are doing well and that I still cherish the time when we took a trip down memory lane ;)
Take care!!!

P.S: If you think you know who I am then at least let me know on Shahnaz jee's blog :) It'll make me happy :)