Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Everything in between

At first there was love...
And then came
Distance
Fear
Confusion
Peace
Understanding
Happiness
Battles
Wars
Anger
Lies
Deceit
Cheating
Hurting
Victory
Loss---

And then there was love...with everything in between

And so he lay
In his room
In agony
And so she sat
In hers
In pain

And yet there was love
And the world keeps turning
Days keep coming
Sun keeps shining
Life keeps happening
And everything in between.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

WOW....beautiful piece of writing shahnaz baji :)

Everything that you write is so true and I know it comes from your heart that is why it has an impact on other ppl (like me :)

Ya are a gr8 writer who knows how to express feelings through words.

Ya know I have exams comin up but I keep on visiting ur blog :) :P heheh keep writing baji because I love reading your stuff.

Also, your writing is so captivating that I love visiting ur blog :)

Love you baji :) May Allah always bless you with happiness!

Anonymous said...

Yet there was love for her,
once he said,
"i did not pray for you",
Yet there was love for her,
Once SHE said,
"Leave me, Go away from my Life
I have nothing for you",
Yet there is love for her,
Yet there is love for her.

hira said...

loved it simply

hira malik said...

strangestranger_35@hotmail.comi just love itt ,,v true feeling

aliskiren said...

Love the new soft backdrop. It's been a while since I stopped by.
Love should have all but deceit, cheating and lies. It's incredible how little you say but still say it all. Wish the best with love, life and your days.
TH