Sunday, November 29, 2009

It's a love story...Part 1

So I came across this one recently-

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Two lovers about to be parted
They poke and prod and suffer the distance
She says-
My friend is in Vermont too.
He visits from time to time.
He's an attorney...He graduated from Harvard Law

He says-
Oh? Why does he visit this country?
Does he work here?

She says-
No.

He says-
Whay does he come?

She says-
He comes to fuck!

He says-
What?

She says-
He comes to fuck- (and she snickers)

He says-
Who does he come to fuck?

She says-
People...

He says-
Does he come to fuck you?

She says-
Well.... no

He says-
Did he come to fuck you? He used to right?

She says-
Yes.

He says-
I don't want to hear it...(and he speeds up the car as she sees his eyes tear up in agony)

She says-
Please stop it...

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But he can't.
He hurts.
She hurts.

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

For this one, I have to say, "Aur bhi bohat se gham hain duniya mein, mohabbat ke siva."

Anonymous said...

And also the licentiousness imbedded in this might be a little inappropriate for your mostly pakistani readership.

Anonymous said...

Part 2
Did they kiss & make up?

Anonymous said...

hunnnnn not interested in "what you wrote" but "why you wrote".
going is not going well???
Pheonix

Mian Naveed Ahmed said...

Agreed wid the last comment, a little inappropriate but it is the Reality

TaAaL said...

I agree to Hmmmmmmm's 2nd post

Har sach bolnay wala nahi hota shahnaz

FAISAL RIAZ said...

It is not wise to put every real thing on the blog or to reveal everything which is hidden, not visible but exists. Even our religion says that bad things of the society should be covered. We should not expose our sins and past for the large interest of the society.

Just for a moment THINK, a truth could be your friend fucking you day & night in absence of your husband and kid. Will it make sense if you tell it to your husband who is being deceived by you? Will it make your kid's life easy if she is told that you have a relation with a man and he fucks you like hell? Or You leave that bloody friend and avoid bad doings in the future and live happily with your husband and kid?

Qadeer Ahmad said...

Love always hurts. It's nothing but pure pain.

Ali said...

Shehnaz, Is there a way to contact you in US ?

ABC good old memories !!! Superb acting..

TaAaL said...

Shahnaz ... I totally understand that this blog is one way that yuh use to do self catharsis but at the same tym yuh must keep in mind that at the same tym its being read, observed and its generating opinions about yuh, yer personality.
Cuz after ABC, only this is the only means ppl have to c yuh, talk to yuh interact with yuh. And if the readers get such kind ov a thing to read then its not gonna leave a gud impression on them.
Therefore i would urge yuh to remove this post from yer blog.

Qadeer Ahmad said...

No need to remove any post. These are her feelings and she is free to write whatever she want. Moreover these posts may help others and comfort them.

TaAaL said...

@ Qadeer ... I m not condemning it or anything to that effect. I just don't want anyone to make up a bad or wrong opinion about Shahnaz after reading this, thats only y m asking her to remove it.
But still its totally upto her if she does that or not.
I just gave my opinion.

Anonymous said...

We would all be better people if we judged others less And judged ourselves more. Love And hugs shahnaz. H x

Timber Wolf said...

its her life...let her live it...at least she has the courage to face her demons

Anonymous said...

weird....just weird